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[Latch]

A few things to say about this: I was inspired by everyone's ideas, and it came together to become all the members in the same city (which is overrun by Zombies) but in different parts of the city. However, I kicked it off with an explosion to set the zombies off in a rampage in the dark city, mainly because I fail miserably at drawing cityscapes. Then I added separate panels to show the different characters reacting to it, and made the panels blank partly because I was lazy and partly because I wasn't sure what backgrounds/different parts of the city the could be in with good light sources, so hey! It seemed like a good idea at the time! And the text in the beginning will hopefully lay out the setting and state of the world for the reader and grab thier interest. Along with a kickass logo at the bottom.

At least I think the logo is kickass...

But I also wanted to leave the page open obviously for the next page, for whoever thinks they should go next and *hint hint* make them all meet up in the middle of a giant fight with a horde of zombies *hint hint*.

I understand that some pages will be boring and no one will want to draw those lulls in the comic, but we can do it!

So, just waiting to get some feedback from you guys before I officially post this on DA.

Who's going to be next?
Is this a good start?
Decently drawn?
Neat logo?

[Sparks]

Pretty good, I just have two things to say.

First, Sparks has essentially been living under a rock in a cave on Mars for the past decade. He has no Idea about the zombies or anything, until he encounters one. He's also essentially mute until he meets Reap, so just have him make a little terrified "meemmp!" sorta sound.
Second, Do you think that explosion could've been caused by Sparks' escape from the prison? Just an idea.

[Latch]

Nov 27, 2008 8:04:55 GMT -5 Sparks said:

Pretty good, I just have two things to say.

First, Sparks has essentially been living under a rock in a cave on Mars for the past decade. He has no Idea about the zombies or anything, until he encounters one. He's also essentially mute until he meets Reap, so just have him make a little terrified "meemmp!" sorta sound.
Second, Do you think that explosion could've been caused by Sparks' escape from the prison? Just an idea.

Well, yeah we keep on doing the prologue stuff, but because Z-Legion was going so slowly I decided to just go ahead and kick off the group thing.
I mean, Sparks can meet up with Reap first in this sequence... but it depends on who is writing the next page. We can fill in the details later after the action subsides and the group gets to know each other I guess. Whatever you feel you're comfortable with. I changed Spark's saying/thought thing.

Who's next?

[inyuo]

Nov 27, 2008 13:45:36 GMT -5 Latch said:

Nov 27, 2008 8:04:55 GMT -5 Sparks said:

Who's next?

My turn

Looking very snazzy, particularly with the layout (and the explosion: explosions are always good!). Everyones differing reactions to one set thing made me grin too

My bunch of curiousities:
So we're not using the 'prologue-and-everyone-slowly-meet-up' idea anymore? Doesnt bother me, and i can see that it's probably best just to get the ball rolling. I may at some point like to draw one ANYWAY, as Dyn doesnt make the hugest amount of sense without it.
Also, is everyone doing Z-Legion a page at a time? Again, can see how that could keep things fresh, but continuality would be a bit of a bummer.
Still, game for anything

aaaand my only real critisism of the first page is that Dyn seems a little too mature (not SENSIBLE mature, but sorta bravardo mature) and cocky for his personality, since most sudden encounters result in a blank stare or a quick retreat (think Ussop or Sokka or someone).
That said, it does make him look (cigar, sunglasses and tommy gun level of) awesome.
And so long as this or future acts of bravado on Dyn's part are met by his complete and utter humilation shortly afterwards I see no problems. ;D

NOW GO POST ON DA

ps this awesome -------->

[Latch]

Nov 27, 2008 16:40:50 GMT -5 inyuo said:

Nov 27, 2008 13:45:36 GMT -5 Latch said:

Nov 27, 2008 8:04:55 GMT -5 Sparks said:

Who's next?

My turn

Looking very snazzy, particularly with the layout (and the explosion: explosions are always good!). Everyones differing reactions to one set thing made me grin too

My bunch of curiousities:
So we're not using the 'prologue-and-everyone-slowly-meet-up' idea anymore? Doesnt bother me, and i can see that it's probably best just to get the ball rolling. I may at some point like to draw one ANYWAY, as Dyn doesnt make the hugest amount of sense without it.
Also, is everyone doing Z-Legion a page at a time? Again, can see how that could keep things fresh, but continuality would be a bit of a bummer.
Still, game for anything

aaaand my only real critisism of the first page is that Dyn seems a little too mature (not SENSIBLE mature, but sorta bravardo mature) and cocky for his personality, since most sudden encounters result in a blank stare or a quick retreat (think Ussop or Sokka or someone).
That said, it does make him look (cigar, sunglasses and tommy gun level of) awesome.
And so long as this or future acts of bravado on Dyn's part are met by his complete and utter humilation shortly afterwards I see no problems. ;D

NOW GO POST ON DA

ps this awesome -------->

Sorry. I wanted to make Dyn... well... cheesy. Because we (you, me, clones) are. If you wanna go ahead and to a meetup thing, sure! I'm cool with whatever you guys want. Yeah, it's a page-by-page thing unless someone really wants to do two pages or something.